Why?

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    Why?

     Why are things as they are?
    Why can't I wish on my lucky star
    For things to change to better not worse?
    Why do I feel as if a curse
    As been placed on me?
    Why can't anyone see
    The feelings swirling inside of me?
    Why do I feel as if I let everyone down?
    Why do I feel as if I've been shoved ot the ground
    Again? Never to get up again.
    I know, my Lord, that you are with me,
    But why can't I see
    You here with me?
    Why are things as they are?
    Will they ever be better or are
    They doomed to be worse?

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    frog commented on Why?

    04-26-2010

    Wow. This poem really hit home for me. Remaining in position through testing times is such a difficult and painstaking process. Hang in there. It's worth it...in God's time!
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    JOZLEAIN commented on Why?

    11-18-2009

    Im feeling your poem. I understand your pain with it. Also i wanted you to give more on how you came out or if your still in that mood. I wanted you to finish it up strong for me. I like it just next time finish out with a complete thought.
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    christliked commented on Why?

    11-18-2009

    It seems that we are both going through the same type of thingand I have got something, the struggles and the barriers are not really obstacles but building blocks for success. These things are our setbacks, and once we proceed beyond them we grow
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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