Wind Mills

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Wind Mills

Windmills stretch my imagination
casting shadows lit by sunlight
catching myths in downy dreams
upon wild windstorm clouds
dancing blades touching
rainbows fanning
quixotic
pipe dreams
fly.

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knight4696 commented on Wind Mills

04-26-2010

Nice Work Sally! You certainly have a gift with being able to convey so much in so few words, I love the cadence and lay-out of the poem as well. Awesome job! :) Ken

nhorlandi commented on Wind Mills

04-18-2010

This one you did it Sally. Carefully chosen words, strong ones, perfect ones and for the most part of it, each word flows smoothly, it fits where it should be.

wheelsal

04/18/2010

Thank you friend.

icu2 commented on Wind Mills

03-19-2010

This is a lovely poem. I especially like 'when fairies land, pipe dreams fly' Beautiful.

wheelsal

03/20/2010

Thanks for reading it. Sally

nhorlandi commented on Wind Mills

03-01-2010

A lovely piece, I remember the wind mills of Holland and we even have wind mills in the Philippines to generate electricity. Cheers

ginga commented on Wind Mills

02-22-2010

wheelsal, I am happy to be back here on your page reading extraordinary poetry like I have just read in this poem of amazing imagery and fanciful language. ginga

wheelsal

03/03/2010

Extrodinary is such a long word and I am honored by it. Thank you so much and congrats to you. Sally

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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