Wing

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    • Grito
    • GRITO PASSED AWAY ON DECEMBER 17TH, 2010 All the poems I post here are my own and are © ed. Thank you for your visit!.

    Wing

    In the harnessed bridle to my mount
    the past surrounds me to recount,
    as smooth silver spurred stirrups guild the union,
    memories in supple leather bend to this notion,
    as a cross of belted bullets span an ocean.
    .
    Long Andes mountain valley below.
    Bushes and rushes along the cliffs.
    Dew laden leaves of grass and snow.
    Tan shadow on brown patches sniffs,
    napping leopard muscles stretch.

    Broad volcano has no waver.
    Boulders glitter in the river.
    Dark blue water wets the rocks and moss,
    tuffs of bushes and rushes toss,
    black hat held tight by the brim,
    cold gold cat tails stalk the rim.
    Sons and daughters of the rain,
    greens and blues that feel no pain.

    Grey mist punctured by sun and wind,
    long gold rays come through the clouds,
    light rivlet that tempers and bonds.
    High eyes key to stretching motion,
    eliptical spiral spins to the ocean.
    Sense at height too too soon
    but springs to mind.

    Magic carpet ride I feel today.
    Flying on an eagles wing to say
    Hendrix blazing a strumming Rainy Day
    and I absorbing mother in my vein.
    Maroon winter coat to seal the name
    motioning summer teal wings to tame,
    blood of the game.

    Such a pleasant pure and simple gain.
    Smoke and fire colors on the brain.
    Heights of elemental cosmic winter sleeting vane.
    Born to seek and see the least mundane.
    Sap of taste to be alive as no refrain.

    I see and live again.



    No wing in vain.

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    tierra7 commented on Wing

    01-04-2010

    Maestro your poetry takes flight!!!!!.....such a beautiful majestic masterpiece , painted w/such grace...i sooooo love readin' your soul of our gifts in the universe...Namaste... Terra @}-'-,- (10+ )

    knight4696 commented on Wing

    12-29-2009

    And the Soul of the Eagle Soars again! Another gift of nature from Grito's Pen! :) Awesome write my friend! Ken

    Grito

    12/30/2009

    Thank you very much for your excellent review kind Ken!!!

    GentleT commented on Wing

    06-23-2009

    wonderfully penned poem. From the scenery of the Alp like mountains to the winding river below to the breaking of the suns rays. From what the eagle must see and be thinking. Just beautiful.

    Grito

    06/23/2009

    Thank you very much kind Gentle!

    AIXA commented on Wing

    04-03-2009

    You have an eagle soul.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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