Winter Haiku

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    My first feeble attempt at this. Please be gentle.

    Winter Haiku

    Winter Haiku

     

    Drips freeze, drops re-freeze

     Dawns shivery icy melt

     Briefly winter thaws

     

    -M. Jacobs

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    stefy commented on Winter Haiku

    03-28-2010

    I like winter and this poem .So impressive!..............................

    danmartyjake1

    03/28/2010

    Thanks so much for checking it out and your comments. Please read more of them, when you have some time, love to hear from you again. ;-)

    kmooney commented on Winter Haiku

    03-05-2010

    Another good one. I like how easy these seem to come to you. We should chat sometime, you and I. I think we could inspire one another. Please read through more of my poems as you have time. Great job, again...K

    danmartyjake1

    03/05/2010

    K, Thanks for your supportive words and for reaching out to me. I shall tune into your page later today, upon returning from work.

    alreedus commented on Winter Haiku

    02-27-2010

    Excellent Haiku. The mechanics are sound and the theme is germane. The shift in paradigm in the last line as well as the word parley seem perfect to me. Great job. -Alan

    danmartyjake1

    02/28/2010

    So grateful you liked it. That was the first one I tried to write and I realized that it was difficult to do. Ty for your support.

    kage commented on Winter Haiku

    02-27-2010

    i love haiku and this is a great one tells so much in a small amount of words wish i could do them as well

    danmartyjake1

    02/28/2010

    This was the first one and I want to work harder at it. TY

    knight4696 commented on Winter Haiku

    02-27-2010

    Marion - For a first attempt you certainly conveyed the imagery well. I hate winter - but like this Haiku .. Thawing .. my favorite part of the season. :) Ken

    danmartyjake1

    02/27/2010

    Me too. I hate winter so much and am tired of it, now. I think I improved a little on "Love Haiku", though.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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