Winter Rain

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    Winter Rain

    Rain falls softly to the ground

    As I look out my window,

    Caressing the Earth like

    The hand of a gentle lover;

     

    I look out and watch the droplets

    And let them take my thoughts to

    Distant things like a lone ship

    Sailing into the horizon;

     

    Slowly they come and envelop

    Me and take me up to the sky,

    Drifting, drifting away . . .

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    rainbowfanatic commented on Winter Rain

    06-21-2011

    i really liked the way you punctuated your poem and where you added your line breaks. the subject matter tickled my imagination as well :]

    pirites commented on Winter Rain

    10-24-2009

    I really enjoy the diversity of your work. let it rain...

    maryjanet commented on Winter Rain

    10-04-2009

    You write very similar to myself, but maybe that's because I was born in Tacoma! I miss WA so bad and love to find people from there that I can relate too. Your words are so deep yet simple also. Keep up the good work.

    dylandean

    10/04/2009

    Thank you. I'm originally from the Eastside and this is an older poem but it's good to meet a former local. I can't wait to check out some of your poems.

    Redrose77 commented on Winter Rain

    10-03-2009

    Nice words. I like your flow with the words. Thanks for sharing your thoughts

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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