WITHOUT TRACE

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This poem is in memory of Trace... her life, her death, and our friendship.

WITHOUT TRACE

    In Memory of Trace

 

She’s gone, there’s no Trace

No more leather, no more lace

No alluring smile upon her face

He took her and left me with no Trace

 

A dark and troubled life she’d led

The hidden tears dark eyes had shed

Dangerous waters she had tread

Today I found out Trace was dead

 

Tough and hard, the role she’d played

Of nothing, she said, was she afraid

But when all her cards had been laid

Twas a tender heart God had made

 

A sister’s love we had shared

To each other souls were bared

Standing by her when no one dared

Staying with me when no one cared

 

Now she’s gone, I have no Trace

No long black hair falling ‘cross her face

In heaven now, a better place

Leaving me here without a Trace

 

 I’ll miss you…


2005

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JadedJezzabel commented on WITHOUT TRACE

11-16-2010

very well written tribute to one who touched you deeply..........sorry for your loss......lost my sister too it never gets easier

julieannetx

11/16/2010

Thanks, I still miss her very much.

kdarcy commented on WITHOUT TRACE

10-31-2010

I also miss her, isn't it amazing how writers and poets are just a bit different? Nice write and tribute to Trace, be well k

julieannetx

11/01/2010

Thanks, it means a lot that you feel my thoughts.

bandit1192 commented on WITHOUT TRACE

10-19-2010

With your touching words, I felt as though I had also lost a friend. Beautifully done.. TS

julieannetx

10/20/2010

Thanks...i miss her...

angelchaser commented on WITHOUT TRACE

10-07-2010

What a beautiful, loving tribute to your friend. I am so sorry for your loss.

julieannetx

10/08/2010

Thanks so much

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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