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Won

I’ll scream it for you,
You’ve won.
I have nothing left to give and
What you give is what you get in this world.
Singled out and broken down,
You’ve outdone yourself this time.
Disappointed again?
As if I really care anymore.
I’ve no excuses left to feed you.
I’ll write it out for you,
You’ve won,
I’m breaking down for your ways.
Do with me what you please,
I’m already too far gone to care.
I am the one who’s become
Worthless beyond belief.
One last try, I’ll have to deny your request,
This time.
I don’t want to take that heartbroken path again. 
Fitted to stand out,
Broken in to make you look good.
I’ll say it for you,
You’ve won this war.
My general’s given up on me.
What more can I do for you?
I’ll sing it for you,
You’ve won.
Now leave me be, these vertical scars
 Are there to remind me of the times 
When I nearly gave up on it all.
I fear I’m getting close again.
You’ve won…
~Kaitlin Platti~
I’ll scream it for you,
You’ve won.
I have nothing left to give and
What you give is what you get in this world.
Singled out and broken down,
You’ve outdone yourself this time.
Disappointed again?
As if I really care anymore.
I’ve no excuses left to feed you.
I’ll write it out for you,
You’ve won,
I’m breaking down for your ways.
Do with me what you please,
I’m already too far gone to care.
I am the one who’s become
Worthless beyond belief.
One last try, I’ll have to deny your request,
This time.
I don’t want to take that heartbroken path again. 
Fitted to stand out,
Broken in to make you look good.
I’ll say it for you,
You’ve won this war.
My general’s given up on me.
What more can I do for you?
I’ll sing it for you,
You’ve won.
Now leave me be, these vertical scars
 Are there to remind me of the times 
When I nearly gave up on it all.
I fear I’m getting close again.
You’ve won…
~Kaitlin Platti~

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StandingBear commented on Won

09-16-2010

A finely written work carrying much sadness. Hang in there Platti, you're a winner! SBear

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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Rain 1
Let Me 3
Train Wreck 3
Somehow 1
Close Friends 1
Washed My Hands Of This 2
Tattoo 3
Mash 1
The Weeping Willow 1
Hollow 1
When Tomorrow Comes 1
The Ribbon 2
Blank 2
Won 1
Puzzle 1
Angels 2
Save Us 1
Down 2
Stakes 1
Drawing Board 1
Every 1
Okay 1
Faint 1
Thread 1
Vindictive 1
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Fly 1
Draining 1
If You Only Knew 1
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Promise 1
Far Away 1
Dreams 1
Hand Print 1
Me 2
Drugs 1
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Sorry 1
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Plunge 2
Honesty 1
Fire 1
Middle 1
Cry 1
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Upside Down 1
Fallen Dawn 1
Dear Mother 1
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Hidden 1
Toy Soldiers 1
Drowning 1
Never Say Never 1
Trust 1
Days 1
Lost 1
Precipice 1
Daze 1
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Quiet 1
Woods 2
Intentions 1
Intentions 1
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Let It Burn 1
Alone 1
Save Me 1
Generations 1
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Never Be 1
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S.O.S 2
Last Goodbye 3
Never 1
Dear Beloved 2
Past 4
Mankind 1
Fated 1
The Pills 5
Run 1
Game 1
Stain 5
Separate Ways 3
Memorize 3
Let It Go -2
Awake -9
Despise 1
Our Place 1
Innocence 1
If It Helps You 1
Steady 1
It's Not Suicide 3
Hold Me Tight 1
Don’t Let It Fade 1
New Dawn 2
War 2
Sunrise 2
Path Of Least Resistance 1
Happy 2
This Time 2
No Regrets 1
You Have My Heart 2
Shattered 2
Reality 1
Nightmare 3
Salvation 1
Unknown Reason 3
Unknown Soldier 2
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A Hopeless Emotion 1
Another Damn Day 1
Humanity 2
Journey 1
Down Pour 2
Your Answer 1
Haunt 1
Sisters 2
Forgotten Memory 1
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Statue 1
Give Up 2
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Immune 3
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