Would you miss me?

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    Would you miss me?
    If i were to hide, leave go to another country, a far away land,
    would you miss me?

    Would you seek for me? Would there be tears?
    Would you reminisce of the love we shared,
    or would you just remember the hurt between us through out our years?

    Would you have regret that we ever met?
    Would you grasp a seed of hatred and let it devour your memories of passion we shared with each other and let it bring you adverse upset?

    Would you dream of me and call out my name?
    Would your heart cry and hurt for me?
    Would my scent arouse your senses in the early morning hours,
    or is my hope and love for you in vain?

    The loneliness in me cries out for you,
    my need for you to understand,
    My hope, desire and passion how they burn for you,
    I just need to know that I'm your man...

    If I were to hide, leave go to another country a far away land,
    would you miss me?

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    purpleswan commented on Would you miss me?

    10-11-2009

    The sadness here hurts the heart. Lost love is something I am very familiar with. This was very easy to read and touched me personally.
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    Worthless commented on Would you miss me?

    10-01-2009

    No one would miss me but I don't care! Feel you there! Well written!!!
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    am2anangel commented on Would you miss me?

    05-30-2009

    Wonderfully written. Makes you wonder if the love you shared was ever strong enough to overcome not only the break up but also the memories of when things went bad. Very heartfelt. I'd love to have you critic some of my work. Thank you.
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    optimistic commented on Would you miss me?

    05-13-2009

    I understand words can't describe the pain and happiness of relationships, so well put
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    MJEmenence commented on Would you miss me?

    04-19-2009

    this is so real: i often wonder,but i don't like to go there.it makes me sad!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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