Writing in Braille

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    I entered, I saw, and left to ask "What are your hands doing?"

    Writing in Braille


    He wanted to fight
    He gave a black eye
    Hands clenched, and no blow

    She wanted a high
    She begged for a dime
    Hands eager, and no dough

    He wanted to eat
    He laid at shoed feet
    Hands gesture, and too slow

    She wanted to cry
    She stood by the side
    Hands quiver, and no hug

    He wanted to kill
    He achieved his thrill
    Hands folded, and already gone

    Is it me to perceive
    A small hand in peace
    Hands out, and held in love
    Is in a world meant to be
    Where only fools can see

    Hehehe silly me
    This must be your city
    I’m writing in Braille

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    MootPoint commented on Writing in Braille

    04-26-2013

    I don't know if I understand this entirely. So if only fools can see and you are writing in Braille then you are not a fool? I am trying to tie that in with the rest of it. It does make you think though.

    cheronld commented on Writing in Braille

    07-05-2011

    The beauty to this is that it was so delicately stated while at the same time screaming......SEE ME....your writing is just as profound as others have stated....this is another wonderful write...Cher

    VaZFynest commented on Writing in Braille

    07-01-2011

    deep..profound...great write.......you should have made it longer.....you got your point across..............kudos

    MommyOf2Girls6 commented on Writing in Braille

    04-25-2011

    I agree with Dano, this is an eye opener. Very nicely written.

    RHPeat commented on Writing in Braille

    12-19-2010

    Brailie has got to feel for it. And I'd say you got the feel of it. Reading the signs on the wall is just the beginning after the fall. So dust them chaps cowboy and get on the horse again. This isn't a ploy; you know where you been. Let's ride! I'm right by your side. There's nothing like a good hand that know how to stand, and that means you, so get a piece of sky blue. A poet friend// RH Peat

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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