YESTERDAYS

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    YESTERDAYS





    YESTERDAY WHEN I WAS YOUNG
    WE RAN AND PLAYED
    CLIMBED TREES
    NOTHING MATTERED
    JUST THE AIR THAT WE BREATHE

    TIMED SPENT, YEARS PASSED
    THOSE WERE YESTERDAY
    AS WILL BE TOMORROW
    A YESTERDAY
    WHO WILL REMEMBER
    HERE TO DAY GONE TOMORROW
    WILL I REMEMBER
    YESTERDAYS SORROW?????

    i WILL REMEMBER AS IF IT WERE TODAY
    TEAR WILL FALL AS YESTERDAYS RAIN

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    MrGee commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-24-2009

    VERY NICE. The poem has very good meter and picks a good picture in the readers mind. however, I think the final line wud read better if it said: Tears will fall as yesterday's rain. This poem also reminded me of a song sung by Al Clark - Yesterday when I was Young. now to the rating having considering this carefully, I rate this work a 10
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    gogant commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-23-2009

    We've used our youth as a magic wand...oh, what things we did and dreamed...some were sad, but we were glad we had them. A quaint little poem, Lydia. gogant
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    confidence17 commented on YESTERDAYS

    11-23-2009

    What is your problem with capital letters?? I like your poems, but if you want to be taken seriously, you should turn off the caps lock.
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    Lydia

    11/23/2009

    what it matter if it caps or not who are you to say how one can type. don't like it don't read it I will make it as I please.what is your problem complaining. what does it matter any ways you have a problem with caps

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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