You and I

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  • Lost Love

    You and I

    we are a brief, epic tale
    of loss, love and betrayal
    hardheaded eggshell feelings
    you crack at the sight of me
    smiling as if you might suddenly
    agree accidentally
    quick witted lover's under pretenses
    we are only our defenses
    uncontrollable in our anger
    you laugh at me
    I think you're demented
    footnotes to pages never written
    I am impossible and so are you
    misread and deluded
    sick without a clue
    and there is nothing left
    to throw at you
    hold my hand for mercy
    there is nothing we can do

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    BigDaddyCash commented on You and I

    11-23-2009

    Love can fill the heart with much intended life spreading your heart far and wide, leaving you hungry with lust and unimaginable desires. Searching for true love is a division of inquiries on an infinite path of ever seeking eyes. Your poetry is like a tear that stains a golden canvas. I feel your words in waves of passion and they are drowning me in raging waters of awareness. What else can I say, I'm wordless, LOL, BDC

    knight4696 commented on You and I

    09-03-2009

    This one confused me - Still loved it - but left me feeling like I missed part of the story. Maybe that was what you intended? Is there a part 2 in the making? :)

    sammia commented on You and I

    06-28-2009

    Im lost for words i dont really know what to say about this poem. I feel the emotions that are coming through this poem as I read it and I feel happy, loss and sad. Good job cause not many ppl can gain my emotions when I read their work but u have with this one. keep writing

    AmadeusEx

    06/29/2009

    this describes my last relationship pretty sufficiently, thank you sammia for reading it

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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