You Are My Everything

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  • blackfootlady
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The most precious gift in life are the ones we love.
                         Sincerily,
                                      CHURV

P.S.Stop clipping the wings of angels put in our lives.....

You Are My Everything

On sunlit skies for today that see tomorrows.
You wipe away tears filled with painful
                             Sorrow's...
On frosted darken nights full of cold remorse.
The Art Of Making Love is not a course.
For You are an Honest Man in every aspect.
Full of Love enhanced with every offer of
                            Respect....
You shun me not in unjust moments or
                        Inspirations....
But you show me gratitude's and      
                         admiration's.
I adore the passage from the depth of my
                           Heart.
For all eternity my soul-mate will never part.
We share the deepest darken secrets of our
                              Life.
I'm so honored by promises to be your wife.
Astonished moments are the thought:
                A gift that you announce...
In all sincerity your honesty is pronounced.
Climb the mountains to the highest peaks and the many storms endured.....
 For;You are my love.
You are my Everything;the only one.

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loneehorse commented on You Are My Everything

12-12-2009

Sometimes everything is all we have.lol I'm touched.You are good.

blackfootlady

12/12/2009

The recognition of my work Has been very rewarding and Ithank you.Churv

Hampton commented on You Are My Everything

12-12-2009

Pure poetry ar its finest. This write speaks of love in a soft voice that resonates throughout OP.

Bettysrainbow48 commented on You Are My Everything

12-12-2009

How sweet. the way it should be in everyway. Done well said well. message sent to your husband in a very loving , devoted way.. 10 thumbs up!! SOUL MATES !! GREAT WRITE !!!

blackfootlady

12/12/2009

Betty Ty for your views this is totally awesome for me to be recognized this way.Ty so much

lsabeth commented on You Are My Everything

12-11-2009

My uncle asked me to read this poem and without a doubt this is a fitting tribute to love. I am adding this poem as one of my favorites. a 10 and keep up the good work

blackfootlady

12/11/2009

Ty to all my friends that helped me make this poem posibble.Especially having a loving husband helps.Churv

summerbird commented on You Are My Everything

12-11-2009

Truly a remarkable poem. This poem reveals the deepest love a man and woman can share. I especially liked the verse that reads - Climb the mountains to the highest peaks and the many storms endure.... So, representative of the trials and tribulations that lovers endure. Thanks for the read.

blackfootlady

12/11/2009

I love the response I'm getting.I had asked a very good to help me the words on that section of this paticular pieceusing my words but with more volume.But personally this is way I truely feel about my husband.He is indeed a very remarkable Man.I don't think this poem could of taken place without him.No ty for your compliment.Churv

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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