You are the maker of who I am

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You are the maker of who I am

You make me feel brilliant

You make me feel inspired

You make me feel so encouraged.

 

When I am around you

You bring me nothing but laughter and joy.

 

However when we are far apart

I start to feel hopeless.

 

But always pull me aside and you let me know that I’m attractive.

You let me know that I can be anything that I want be.

 

You let me know things that I never thought of before

And you also make me feel ways that I never felt before.

 

You and I

We laugh together

We even pray together

You and I share tears together

 

You tell me that I am someone

You told me that I am someone that will soon become somebody

 

You let me know that you are here for me

And forever we will always defend each other.

 

You are the maker of who I am.

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IzzyGumbo commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-11-2009

Well done Poet, this is well written and very inspirational. I'll be reading more :)

almonord1990

10/11/2009

THANK YOU FRIEND

Charlie23 commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-10-2009

This is very well written, almonord! I find it spiritual and inspirational!

Starhawk commented on You are the maker of who I am

10-06-2009

It's always good to have at least one close friend. keep writing.

almonord1990

10/06/2009

thank you

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

almonord1990’s Poems (28)

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In the mist of my eyes 2
3 Times her size 5
Feeling the sheets 3
Meeting a girl’s father 2
I am so in love with you 1
Drifting 1
Don't forget about the love 2
Preparing me 1
Our hearts beat as one 1
I wear the pants in this relationship 2
I can feel it in the wind. 3
You are the maker of who I am 3
I have to be real 1
I will 2
CHANGING MY LIFE 4
Mother Set Me Free 3
HIGHER 4
SHINE 6
STEP BY STEP 2
LOVE KILLS 2
Father and son 2
Tragedy 4
your past 3
the fight 3
Did you ever dream? 5
Using You 7
The Strangest Feelings 6
My Type Of Women 7