YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING

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Something I wrote for the love of my life, my one and only, my dear husband. Our 25th wedding anniversary will be in October... I have been dealing with several things in my life for about 6 years. He has been there for me all the time. Sometimes I feel like I am loosing control and don't even understand myself but he stands there like a pillar holding me up... He always finds a way to make me come out of the darkness I hide at times...

YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING

You understand me so well,

never judge me when I do wrong.

No matter how wicked I may want to be,

you bring out the good in me.

You make me smile when I am down,

get me laughing when I do frown.

When I hate myself,

you make me see the beautiful in me.

I flutter like a butterfly when I'm by your side.

I can't see any flaws seeing myself in your eyes.

You make me shine like a star in the darkest nights.

You make every day brighter,

my life greater,

You love me as I am.

I can blabber and whine and you still listen,

let me vent out,

cool off,

feel free to say as I please.

I can do anything,

nothing scares you away.

It doesn't matter if I deserve it or not,

you make me happy.

I have no need for expectations

you give me everything,

your time,

your ear,

your shoulder

your whole heart.

You are so amazing.

I am glad to have you in my life...

©2013 by Maria C. Pulido

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gmcookie commented on YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING

04-24-2013

25 years and going strong! He sounds like he's still got some years left in him... You better keep him! hehe

poett

04/24/2013

Thanks lol... I sure will try hahaha

Reicheru commented on YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING

04-24-2013

This is beautiful, really good you have a poet in you :)

poett

04/24/2013

Thank you ;)

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

poett’s Poems (46)

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the devil i adore 3
STARTING ANOTHER YEAR TOGETHER WITH A BLAST 0
EMOTIONAL CHAOS 6
YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING 3
SENTIMENTAL NOSTALGIA 2
WHEN ISABELLA SMILES 4
AN OLD OWL'S HOPE 2
AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES 5
SWEET SMELL OF DANGER 3
FOUND MYSELF TONIGHT 7
SAD 6
Es tan Facil / It's so easy 6
MY CHOCOLATE LOVE INSANITY 5
CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN? 7
WHAT WOULD YOU DO 6
WITCHY MOM 5
LOVE IS FORGOTTEN 1
THUNDER STORMS WON'T GO AWAY 1
OPEN DOOR 0
A ROSE IS ALL HE LEFT 2
I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS 2
ERES MI MOTIVO - YOU ARE MY MOTIVE 0
A LOVER'S FULL MOON 0
I WAS LEFT IN SOLITUDE 0
I AM SO SMALL IN YOUR HANDS 0
ITS DIFFICULT ( ES DIFICIL) 0
LOVE 1
DEATH STOP TAUNTING ME 0
MI QUERIDA BELLA - MY DEAR BELLA 0
EXCRUCIATING PUNISHMENT 2
WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES 3
FOR ALL PARENTS ESPECIALLY THOSE WITH TEENAGERS 6
POETRY IS MY LIFE 1
MY IMMORTAL LOVE 0
WELCOME TO HELL 3
Pensive Gaze 1
In My Father's Hands 1
I Am Not Alone 1
I Stand Alone 4
I Wish I Could Just Fly Away 1
To Play 1
Everything Is Collapsing Around Me 0
Lets Divide It By Two 1
You Mean Everything To Me 1
It Only Takes A Minute 2
DEATH 3