You have awakened me

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    You have awakened me

    You have awakened me from my nightmare
    You are there to comfort me
    I awake to you
    Showing me you care
    You reach out for me
    Taking me into your embrace
    I can see in your eyes
    You do not lie
    That you care for me
    In ways I never knew
    You tell me it is alright
    Not to be a fright
    That you will always be there
    To not have any cares
    Cause your love will always be there
    You have awakened my soul
    To a love so real
    Its so amazing
    To see how all of the pieces fit
    So perfecctly and in the right timing
    I never knew it could be this beautiful
    You have awakened me....


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    stellar commented on You have awakened me

    10-19-2009

    Love it...love is always like that..we must take and we must also receive...this poem is so sweet

    cjmason commented on You have awakened me

    10-02-2009

    I like your poems i get what your trying to put in their . Its a beautiful poem

    squadrod commented on You have awakened me

    09-30-2009

    Saticfaction, longed for a fulfilling feeling of being able to love as well as recieve

    1990lh commented on You have awakened me

    09-26-2009

    very beautiful and lovely poem tells a story of some one that is there to comfort and love u great write

    Vincent commented on You have awakened me

    09-26-2009

    love, A nice story of love, well done,, smiles Vincent

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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