You Know Your In Love if....

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    • jerseycrtz
    • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

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    Poem I made about being in love. Don't you just love it?

    You Know Your In Love if....

    You know you're in love when you feel good all over,
    and you don't care about what people say.
    You feel giddy and happy all the time,
    and he helps you along the way.

    You know you're in love when you hear lullabies from his mouth,
    and his words are just soft little notes.
    And if you were to ask, "Whos the nicest guy in town?"
    He would have gotten everyones votes.

    You know you're in love when he makes you laugh,
    when he says something as simple as "Hi".
    He makes you smile at the most random moments
    and he comforts you when you cry.

    You know your in love when you smell roses everywhere
    and he can do the most romantic things.
    and even in the coldest day of winter
    He could make it feel like it were Spring.

    You know your in love if you compliment him every day
    No matter what he's wearing.
    If he smiles and compliments you back
    you know that he is caring.

    He smiles
    He laughs
    He talks
    He chats
    and all the while you love him more.
    Do you know what you would do,
    if he walked through that door?

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    jerseycrtz commented on You Know Your In Love if....

    03-31-2010

    I'd be honored. I actually did this as a way to talk with others about what we all are going through. Can't wait to think up something else to share! ;)

    harmony74 commented on You Know Your In Love if....

    03-31-2010

    He did walk through the door, I was totally floored! My Beloved how could this be..your in love with me? Oh So i get it, ur the one who stalked me and who in the still of the night was standing in my backyard tree!

    harmony74 commented on You Know Your In Love if....

    03-31-2010

    He walked through the door. I was in disbelief, It was him all along! This is more then a chcolate bar..this is more then a treat.. Oh wow I cant help it..my heart Just skipped a beat! LOL

    jerseycrtz

    03/31/2010

    LOL Nice! Luv it!

    harmony74

    03/31/2010

    I tried...i realized though i probably ruined it by throwing it the choclate bar thing..I am so rusty with poetry..anytime u do another Please inform me. I think it would actually help me with poems if I could add to them ..this was fun and actually a challenege in a way.

    jerseycrtz commented on You Know Your In Love if....

    03-30-2010

    Can anybody make more verses???

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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