You Must Decide

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  • Sadness

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    This is something I wrote years ago-although I still deal with depression-things are better-MOSTLY

    You Must Decide

     I fear loneliness
    it stalks me in the night
    I need sustenance
    to make it alright
    My soul is nauseous
    My heart bleeds inside
    living is only slow suicide
    Think of it this way
    it's the way that I can...
    If life is only pain
    and death could
    make you live again
    Then could it be true?
    living is slow suicide
    you must decide

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    Crush commented on You Must Decide

    03-14-2010

    wow, so sad. quite the question and feeling in this poem. i did like it .
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    knight4696 commented on You Must Decide

    03-14-2010

    Wow Earthy! Damn good question! You definately capture the thoughts one may have when dealing with this deadly disease. Awesome write! Ken ... btw .... I wrote a series on Depression consisting of 4 poems you miight want to check out If you do -please read them in order ... they are 1) Maybe Tomorrow, 2) On The Cliff's Edge, 3) In My Desperate Hour and 4) In A Blink Of An Eye. ....
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