? YOU ?

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    ? YOU ?

     I believe I've met you somewhere before.
    It's as if we were reaqainted as I walked through the door.
    As our eyes engaged one anothers in an unsaid delight.
    Did we once undress one another or is this love at first sight?
    Conflicted by the energy and emotion surrounding our beings.
    As if destined to be a real life Love Jones thing.
    Now tell me where you came from I beg of you please.
    I know what happened, this is the man I dreamed of and prayed for on my knees.
    Oh my lord I've awaken from this realistic but lovely fantasy.
    So I can engulf you and swim deep within you like the deep blue sea.

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    Product commented on ? YOU ?

    06-28-2009

    Love can be hidden,so at many times we overlook the find.That dwells before us.Don't look so much and it will find u.
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    boriquamorena

    06/30/2009

    This is how I always find love it revealed to me. thanx

    FLAWLES commented on ? YOU ?

    06-27-2009

    This is good also. I'm glad you've decided to post more of your work. Everyone has their own style; and you certainly have yours. Now, go to my page and read "? ME ?"
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    boriquamorena

    06/27/2009

    ME is very good.So when can we be friends? Holla

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    boriquamorena’s Poems (8)

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    To Be 2 07/01/2009
    UNTITLED 3 06/30/2009
    Overated 7 06/27/2009
    ? YOU ? 2 06/26/2009
    IF I ? 3 06/26/2009
    What do you see? 4 06/24/2009
    untitled 4 06/16/2009
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