your illnesses

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    your illnesses

    runnin the streets with skills for a trife gangsta
    not knowing if you love me or not
    smokin somethin i thought would just give me a better high,drinkin everything in site
    givin up on the bullshit you both tormented me with
    feeling nothin for you or your illness
    you can be mommy for someone else
    just like daddy takin care of other peoples kids but not his own fuckin kids
    gone all the time
    stuck in your lonely ways
    put up with enough
    you never taught me shit eathier
    the streets gave me there love
    other people opened there doors for me
    and when it was just to damn cold
    i always took care of me
    i was born alone
    i sure the hell can take care of me
    love was always shit
    ma showed me it
    daddy showed me it
    and your lovely fiancee
    tried to give me some in a different way
    6 years old in court testifying till i was 12
    thanx ma
    you both showed me so much
    i know so much yesterday
    to not raise my son alone the way you raised me
    im both mommy and daddy for him

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    motherofsix commented on your illnesses

    03-03-2009

    Love your poem,its deep and real and you did a great job keep writing.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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