Your Kiss

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One of my greatest joys as a writer, is collaborating with other writers to express feelings of love and emotions. Sammia and I joined together to bring you, Your Kiss. I have found her wonderfully talented and charming as well. Please enjoy.

Your Kiss

When looking into your eyes,
I see a thousand stars go by
Showing no lies
Of our love never wanting to die.

Only to find our way
Through the galaxies of stars,
To the most distant quasar.
Just to remember the taste of your kiss,
And surrender our love to heavenly bliss.

The love we have will never be missed,
When two hearts join on a night like this.
Total bliss and affection will be felt miles away,
When you know love is coming to stay.

To know the taste of your kiss,
A feeling I just cant resist.
To have one last kiss,
On a night so special, as one like this.

As we watch the sunrise in the early morning,
And set sail against a sailors warning.
That love will always find a way,
To bring us to another day,
With the taste of your kiss.


Knowing that love has found us to no end,
While binding us together.
With one last kiss,
With the last taste of your kiss.







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Worthless commented on Your Kiss

10-22-2010

Well written... Except when a kiss is that strong and irresisteble, you never want a last kiss. Like 50 first dates... Hundred's of first last kisses...

summerrose35 commented on Your Kiss

03-02-2010

this is well done.the chemistry is there to make this a really great poem.

HopeOhlarik commented on Your Kiss

02-23-2010

very well done pap and sam! y'all did a great job! i want to read more of this =P

redbloodink commented on Your Kiss

02-21-2010

nice lone.... just fantastic.................. red

kage commented on Your Kiss

02-07-2010

great poem i like it .worded well and the rhyme is great

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