Your Kiss

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    Your Kiss

    Your kiss....
    I breathe in, you breathe out.
    Simplicity at its best.
    Kiss... kiss me.
    Lay next to me,
    promise you wont leave me.
    You... you can make sure
    that  I never get that way again.
    Kiss me,
    make me believe
    that everything is okay.
    In your lips,
     I find reality.
    A reality,
    with no society.
    No stereotypical life.
    A REAL reality.
    A reality of you.
    And me.
    And your kiss.
    Holding me up,
    up to the sun.
    I let it shine on my face,
    and I bare my arms.
    In the grass, we lay
    in the sun and the sky
    and the clouds and the sweet breeze.
    Everything is okay,
    for you make me believe,
    with your kiss. 

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Your Kiss

    10-21-2010

    It is an excellent poem, you are quite the poet:) I hope you keep writing:)

    brokenhearted11

    10/21/2010

    thankyou :) and will do

    sunshine33710 commented on Your Kiss

    09-19-2010

    THat was very good wirte. Keep up the good work my friend. I like how you said, promise you won't leave me. I just hope that my man never leaves me.

    brokenhearted11

    09/20/2010

    heh heh heh yeah. thank you!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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