Your life

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    • stormimartin
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    Your life

    Book of words
    Book of magic
    Everyones lives so tragic
    Questions of doubt
    Questions of reason
    Everyone so quick to commit treason
    Smiles to believe
    Smiles that decieve
    Minds always working to relieve
    Relieve the stress
    Relieve the mess
    No one ever willing to confess
    Confessions of the heart
    Confessions of the mind
    Everything else left behind
    Behind in time
    Behind trying to rewind
    So lost in the race I'm trying to face
    Facing the day
    Facing the hour
    Everyone trying to take all the power
    Power to want
    Power to need
    Everyone wanting to plead
    Pleads of cry
    Pleads of not wanting to die

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    Weatherstone commented on Your life

    04-08-2009

    One of your best! Good form and flow that makes the reader focus. The rhyme is well done and not over done. Keep more like this coming!

    organicchick commented on Your life

    04-01-2009

    I like the flow, really good poem. I tend to like poems that rhyme.

    JaLaw commented on Your life

    01-21-2009

    Nice flow.

    Vincent commented on Your life

    11-29-2008

    good poem

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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