Your Love Pours

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    Your Love Pours

    Poem 5

    Write a poem with regulated syllabic lines: The poem should have 10 to 15 lines made up of verses with 8 or 10 syllables each: Regulated metric lines have the same number of syllables


    Jupiter’s rings, if they were made of gold
    I would place upon your finger, my love.
    And not because the third can fit the space,
    But because your heart fills it and gives more:
    Beyond the band dewdrops of honeyed love
    Pours… much like the oil of Elijah’s word;
    Enough that from the excess I can use,
    And stand in the assurance that there’s store.
    The women of my past only gave drops…
    That as drizzles in deserts during drought
    Quickly dried on the arid surfaces…
    And the ring they would use as a jump rope…
    To dance away… but such is not your way,
    And your love is topped only by Christ’s drink
    And of the promises of both, I’m sure.

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    WordSlinger commented on Your Love Pours

    05-02-2010

    Awesome write. 1. I would place upon your finger, my love. I would place it upon your finger love ty WS

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