YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

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This poem was written for my mom some time ago, but can be applied to anyone with a loving, generous spirit.

YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

You're beautiful...


Like a rose, your heart is tender
And like a rock, your spirit's strong
Look at how you love!


When others turn and walk away
You're the one who comes to stay
To lend a strong arm, a listening ear
Embracing sorrows, drying tears


Like a tree bearing fruit
You give to those in need
Within the hearts of the wounded
You plant love's seed...


And oh, how you shine!


I've never seen a brighter smile
So genuinely warm, like the kiss of a child
Your inner beauty radiates from your face
Where you go, like an angel, you light up the place


The light of your love reflects like a jewel
In my eyes, you'll aways be beautiful


(c) Copyright 2002 Melanie D. West

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Chaos128 commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

12-15-2009

Genuiness is a rare characteristic (in my experience), but your work here makes me feel like I've encountered some.

mdpoetgirl

12/16/2009

Thanks a lot, Chaos... good to hear from you, and glad you liked this one ;-)

organicchick commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

06-01-2009

Very warm, loving words. I love this heartfelt poem.........made me feel like hugging someone i love!!! Thanks for the sweet words!

mdpoetgirl

06/02/2009

Then by all means, give someone a hug! LOL... glad you enjoyed it!

jceclipse commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

06-01-2009

Beautifully put. This reminds me of.................. the face of GOD. I'm sure the same would probably be said for you.

mdpoetgirl

06/01/2009

Yes, this poem could definitely be a description for GOD. He embodies all of this and so much more! Thanks for reading...

Chrisjan commented on YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL (c) Copyright 2002

05-29-2009

Your poem is imaginative full of detail and love- true friends, share + give your loves', from above ! Thanks for sharing.

mdpoetgirl

05/30/2009

Thanks, Chris.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.