2 towers

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    2 towers

    as they stand so still

    a shimmer in the sky

    draws us in so closely

    we see a plane pass by

    all start to run

    but ther is no where left to hide

    the plane is closing in

    people pick up their stride

    the first plane hits

    the towers start to tremble

    they second doesn't help

    they both disassemble

    as they both come down

    we here so many screams

    everyones in shock

    the tears come in streams

    a blanket of smoke

    covers up the rubble

    god doesn't want us to see

    so he puts it in a bubble

    as the smoke clears

    the brave fireman rush

    not knowing what to expect

    everythings so hush

    as the search begins

    the word is spread

    of those less fortunate

    who may be dead

    people start to wonder

    if their loved ones are coming back

    and many are frustrated

    at this terrorist attack

    but we live in America

    and all of us are free

    the towers are still standing

    just not physically

    in our hearts

    they'll always be

    the brave men and women

    who risked their life for me!

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    Laine commented on 2 towers

    06-10-2009

    I really liked dis! U did a good job and its still sad about what happened dat day !!!!!!! keep up good work

    TheAngelOfDeath commented on 2 towers

    02-20-2009

    great meaning...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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