A DAY WITHOUT YOU

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A DAY WITHOUT YOU

a DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR LIFE
A DAY WITHOUT YOU MY DEAR WIFE
A DAY WITHOUT YOU MY DEAR CHILD
WILL MAKE ME GO WILD AND WILD
SO ALSO
 A DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR ORIGINAL POETRY
A DAY WITHOUT YOU THE MEMBERS OF THE
ORIGINAL POETRY
A DAY WITHOUT YOU
MY DEAR POEMS
MAKES ME GO WILD AND WILD
AND PLAY TANTRUMS LIKE MY CHILD

DAY IN AND DAY OUT
I WANT TO EAT POETRY
DRINK POETRY
SLEEP POETRY AND WALK POETRY.

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lisaner commented on A DAY WITHOUT YOU

09-23-2012

I enjoyed this poem- Makes me go wild and wild! I feel the same way. Nice job, Giri.

EyesOfRain commented on A DAY WITHOUT YOU

09-23-2012

This is very cool! I always get excited when I log in because I hope to see some new comment on my stuff :))) Nice work Giri!

giri

09/23/2012

dhanyawad eyes of rain

EyesOfRain

09/24/2012

I looked up dhanyawad, but I see there is no way to say "Your Welcome" in Hindi, so please accept it in English! Your Welcome friend!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

giri’s Poems (30)

Title Comments
Title Comments
my saute to every sister 1
A DAY WITHOUT YOU 2
cheat 2
autism a boon or bane 6
look at my body 0
nothing in our hands 1
touch my heart 3
work is worship 1
love to live and live to love. 1
god is my lord. 0
love regained. 0
marriage 1
think 0
where am i 0
surprise 0
my dear son 0
touch your heart. 1
am I old.? 0
immortal 2
life is to excel. 1
eclipse 1
fantasy 0
winner 1
am i a poet. 1
truth -wife. 0
evergreen life. 4
sexy 1
mothers love. 1
emotional 1
my friends 1