accidental assassin

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    accidental assassin

    you can call me an accidental assassin 
    cuz i shoot things i shouldn't even point my gun at
    but my weapons are only used for passion
    but i learned a valuable lesson though
    you shouldn't play with something u should cherish
    but yeah i shot him 
    n i didnt even mean it 
    i got trigger happy it was a crime i didn't mean to commit 
    not only his heart suffered but i felt a hit but it was more like a blow
    but justice has been served 
    i suffer more than you could ever know 
    thoughts of you rush through my mind like a flip book 
    n i just cant watch anymore 
    n i as each day goes by take deep breaths 
    i used my breathing techniques like neosporin
    as if it will heal the cut in my heart 
    n they say time heals all wounds but my clock stop ticking 
    im forever stuck in a non time moving position 
    ... motionless is the only way i can describe it.
    but if i could go back in time 
    i never would of pulled out that gun 
    n this never would have been written 
    but i guess everything happens for a reason.

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    cmlestrade commented on accidental assassin

    12-15-2009

    Well I hope you really didn't shoot anybody, but if you did forgive yourself and get on with life. This is a good poem about what happens when we don't think things out and act on impulse, it's well written very rhythmic and has a nice meter.

    mcelvain

    12/15/2009

    thanks ,no i didnt shoot someone by the way. may i ask how you know co much about poetry?,n i always appreciate your feedback.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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