All Alone

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    All Alone
        The untouched despair of ones wishful desires, endlessly wanders.
    Strolling alongside the shoreline of seclusion alone,
    feverishly yearning for that faultless dream.
    Ingenious visions of happiness clouds the night
    as the sunset fades beyond the horizon.

    Tonight is dazzling and as beautiful as the shining stars.
    Mist of compassion hovers in the background.
    Deep inside my reckless imagination,
    I know that the flight aboard this hallucination plane will be over soon.

    Fearlessly fantasizing the soothing pleasures of loves affection.
    Segments of significance compliment this imitational adventure.
    Lost in the atmosphere of the passion,
    the depths of my soul speculate intimacy.

    Superficial wanted wishes are not a typical routine escapade.
    However, another exaggerated delusional journey suggests to me that I am still in need.
    It’s a constant reminder of my empty dreams.

    After this enormous illusion, I find it necessary to regress.
    In my erratic mind, I just had the most perfect night of my life…in love
    …all alone.

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    DeepEclipse commented on All Alone

    06-23-2010

    [hallucination plane] - damn man perfect explanation. It explained the heightened feel of the piece. Passion and expression vent with emotional and intellectual wording. It is almost as if the meaning behind the piece silently states that there is no end to how enjoyed life can be. Wherever we are or whoever we are with it is always there. We just don't always snatch it up. Very vivid write.
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    am2anangel commented on All Alone

    01-03-2010

    great write. good descriptive wording. A sad journey one at times has to travel. Hoping only it makes one stronger. well done.
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    dumplin commented on All Alone

    01-03-2010

    I've been here, especially lately, Joker. I know this feeling intimately. Well written. Thank you for letting me know I'm not alone.
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    koolmom0 commented on All Alone

    01-03-2010

    I like this, it's an awesomwe piece. Good Write my friend. Koolmom
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    nonners commented on All Alone

    01-03-2010

    i flippin loved this your use of imagery was most fabulous. i could smell the smells and see the shining stars-well done!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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