Alone

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Alone

 Purity once had a name,
And beauty once had a face.
Life once had a meaning,
And once I was safe.
Once there was freedom,
And once I could laugh.
Happiness once was alive,
And once I had another half.
Once I shared her love,
Once I was by her side,
Once I felt I fitted,
So quickly that died.
Her grace so great,
Her beauty so vast,
All we ever wanted,
Was for it to last.
Fate maybe had another plan,
Or maybe it was the mixed up love,
But it all fell apart,
The hand too big for the glove.
Now it's all died away,
Happiness, joy, love; all memories.
Now I walk alone in this dark, dark world,
With no light to guide my way.

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stellar commented on Alone

12-08-2009

I love hot the way how you executed bitterness...it squeeze the heart but don't let bitterness corrupts you...the world is still beautiful amidst the darkness we experience sometimes

KristyLoren commented on Alone

08-23-2009

Wow, what great lyrics and rhyme And your broken heart, I can really relate. You get my ten and that's hard to do. Great Job!!

Staycee commented on Alone

08-22-2009

yes I do see we are the same sad that hearts are broken but then it gives us something to write about :)

warsaw commented on Alone

08-22-2009

Anyone with a heart hears this work that you've done and can appreciate it, I have two things to say Mr. Virgo you will love hard again, keep your heart safe for the next love of your life, my first one died and I couldn't go with him but I painfully waited for the other shoe to fall in my life but instead love found me, and I'm in another place in love that I;ve neve been before, Virgo's are the sappy strong willed ones, I appreciate you and your wok thank you for sharing sincerely WARSAW

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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