Another piece of my [heart ]

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  • Emotional
    • Santeeboi
    • is so hurt--- tryin' to look on the bright side!!!!

    Another piece of my [heart ]

    Feelin' a lil like im not where you wanna' be,
    bein' that all i want
    for you is 4 you to be happy,
    Let me kno' what you think every moment
    of,
    and Wat makes your insides seem so out of place,
    so i can fix the
    brokenness you feel within,
    believe i feel it too because we are as
    one
    rather you believe it or not,
    your completely where i wanna' be,
    [the
    broken heart that i want to restore is only within you]:(

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    prophesy commented on Another piece of my [heart ]

    02-19-2009

    your feeling is there, your mood is right, you can only grow more with all your might./ cool young poet

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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