As Cute as a Basket of Puppies.....

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    As Cute as a Basket of Puppies.....
    These dogs of wrath that lick my sores with a soothingly venomous salivation……
                                Sedation?......
    Never!
    Flee must I from such perilous puppies prone to poison-osity!

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    Tempestlady commented on As Cute as a Basket of Puppies.....

    07-10-2009

    Don't get poison puppies, humor? fear of complacency, fear of love, afraid to get sucked in to their trap. Good write, can't tell whether its really deep, or what though. Write on.....
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    Doulos

    07/10/2009

    thanks... its funny....trying to read into my own pieces....I do it all the time...but i think that this one is simply funny word play....again there is some hint of a fear of complacency or something deeper...but it was mostly unintentional

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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