Babygirl

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  • Happiness

    Babygirl
    I received the best gift one winter
    In my world she is the center

    I may not have given birth to her
    But she is what I live my whole life for

    She is my angel with so much love
    My tears for a child were sent to GOD above

    She healed my heart with just one smile
    For my babygirl I will walk that extra mile

    The pain in my heart has been freed
    This little girl is just what i need

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    edb6163 commented on Babygirl

    06-06-2009

    I like your poem. The poem provides a sentiment shy of sentimentality. The end-rhymes are a little forced but overall I enjoyed the write. You are a good writer. Keep them coming!
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    WordSlinger commented on Babygirl

    04-01-2009

    Awe, I read your other poem , so congradulations, :)
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    tinybutmighty85

    11/20/2010

    Don't have a child of my own

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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