because of you

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    because of you

    I sit alone along the lake
    to watch the sun descend,
    I used to sit and think
    of how my life might end.
    I once longed for the icy touch
    of the Blade across my skin,
    And I knew the line I
    walked was very, very thin,
    My parents didn’t listen
    they barely even heard
    Of the pain that I was going
    through they said I was absurd.
    I viewed my life as glass;
    Glass that had been shattered
    and then was soaked with gas.
    As my life got worse
    I saw the gas ignite
    I turned away in pain as the
    flames they grew so bright.
    I tried to douse the fire
    and clean up all the mess,
    But my hands got burned and
    bloodied and added to the mess.
    Through the burned and broken
    pieces I tried to sort them through,
    And I realized this all started
    when I fell in love you.

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    DavidRayy commented on because of you

    11-03-2009

    wow!! nicely written, great flow like a stedy drum roll just carried me through!!!

    spbsdude commented on because of you

    10-15-2009

    Love can be painful, especially if it is of the forbidden variety. Very expressive and heartfelt. Nice job.

    Grito commented on because of you

    03-22-2009

    Love as pain, but God turns into sunshine, all that was once rain.

    Drivingczar commented on because of you

    03-21-2009

    There is no better therapy than your inner strength to share with us strangers that care!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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