Believe
Song-
somedays,
i cant,
even see.
I try to open up my mind,
but all I see,
is the fog in front of me,
Tell me,
it will all be clearer.
Don't you try to open up your mind,
it wont work until...
you believe...in...your...heart.
Believe
3 Comments
Tags: Emotional
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09-20-2009
- As you say, " Believe...in...your...heart" first. It will be then,and only then, I believe your mind will finally open up and things will be very clear and no fog whatsoever. Thats how things work ONE DAY AT A TIME. Certain things may take several days, but never the less, it will eventually be clear......You said it very well ! :)
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09-19-2009
- Hi brookeD, I'm so inspired by your insight, keep looking within yourself for that's where the real light shines, so let it shine for all who have eyes will see.
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09-19-2009
- I think it is a good start one with potential but I think the body needs work. Description or telling a tale to make your point would envolve the reader more just a thought Robert...
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