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Thoughts turn to dreamsdreams to reality
reality is just fantasy
wrapped in a bow.
The bow is set to unravel
the moment a dreams deferred
it turns
Back to a thought
thought to a synapse
and gone in a flash
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dreams to reality
reality is just fantasy
wrapped in a bow.
The bow is set to unravel
the moment a dreams deferred
it turns
Back to a thought
thought to a synapse
and gone in a flash
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MrGee commented on Blank Page
09-26-2009
- do u mean a rainbow? Very interesting poem and I like the way u used the word synapse. actually, this poem is very good, however the first lines seem to circle one another. Perhaps, your next poem will not be so concise as to confuse some of the readers. And I encourage you to continue writing I believe you have a handle on writing poems . And perahps u would read my poem entitled -Forlorn_ it is concise.
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09/26/2009
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