BROKEN HEARTED

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    BROKEN HEARTED

    I miss you so much I dont know what do
    I still dont know what happened between me and you
    One minute we where so happy and everything was cool
    Then the next thing you know we where fighting, and then where through
    Why did it end like that? we where supposed to be better
    And us breaking up was supposed to be never
    Senseless arguements truned into pointless fights
    But I guess were both just at different points in our lives
    And even though breaking up was the best thing we could have done
    In a world full of darkness you were my only sun
    I can only hope in the future we can finish what we started
    But until then!
     i'll just remain BROKEN HEARTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Chaos128 commented on BROKEN HEARTED

    10-07-2009

    When somebody else is the star of your life, fivestar, then you have to depend on them for light and warmth... You see where I'm going with this? Affecting verse.

    fivestarchick

    10/07/2009

    yea I know where your going with that and i have learned my lesson about love I will never wrap my life around another persons again no matter how much I love them

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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