broken

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    • kutiespie
    • i love love but love seem not to love me so why is it we chase for something that we can never grasp

    Poem Commentary

    it a very well thought prospective what i see in myself and how my life is

    broken

     i,m afraid of being hurt agian
    to feel the pain i always feel
    beacuse i'm me that who i'm always going to be is me
    for a fact you don't like me beacuse im a rag doll with black hair and brown eyes sexy combnation  right but im still broken
    with two working legs and bretheing lungs but i wonder what ive done
    to make me this sad i am broken
    arent you glad  see my tears and my fear beacuse i am broken
    but i  can fly without another person to steer
    beacuse i am broken

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    jamie7121f commented on broken

    12-15-2010

    Hmm. I see this poem with potential, but it would be more enticing to read if the grammar and punctuation was revised. I like it though. :)
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    Desmeii commented on broken

    12-15-2010

    Hi kutiespie once again I enjoyed your poetry,well done.They're short but who said good poetry is long cos it isn't.You're straight to the point & I really like it,keep writing...peace,Shirl
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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