Broken

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Broken

You broke my heart once,

It got better with time,

You broke my heart again,

I got over you just fine,

I wish i knew how to spend more than one or two weeks with a guy,

Because my heart cant handle any more lies.

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NBParis commented on Broken

07-26-2011

I agree with my friend Windsongs, also as a guy, not all of us lie. I'm sorry you have had to deal with those losers. Your poem is a great expression of your pain. You write well, keep them coming. Peace.

dakotabarnett

07/26/2011

well thank u very much i have alot of poems just not much time to put them on here

windsongs commented on Broken

07-25-2011

the remants of a broken heart lie in the warmth of a sleeping bag!!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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