Bursting

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    Bursting

    Same old day  never a change
    some people like it
    i guess i do.
    life is to long of a range

    We are best after death
    no one to bother us
    no food to eat
    no breath

    I have had a hard life,
    my heart feels like it will burst,
    of all things,
    living is the worst.

    Never seen much in a woman,
    dont have one with me.
    since there was liz,
    you know she set me free.

    There is nothing to help it,
    ill die here alone i am sure.
    just feels right ,
    don't want a cure.

    I stand in line
    and look over the hills
    don't need more freedom
    dont like their pills

    just an old  country boy
    who went to kill the yellow man
    i didn't want to
    it wasnt my plan

     

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    am2anangel commented on Bursting

    02-26-2010

    well, I really liked it great flow and rhyme. sure is sad however with just a glimpse of hope. well done. I hope you find something in your life to bring you joy before the end.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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