Bye Bye Love Letter

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    • rainyxsun
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    First Poem Made Since Middle School.

    Bye Bye Love Letter

    Spoken words were not what I could say,
    All I could do was be scared and hide behind her.

    On paper is how I could express these feelings,
    Was happy with what was complete.

    Was not     able to come close to you,
    Because my shyness was something I couldn't control.

    Enough     of this has pushed you away,
    Slowly turning away from me.

    Spoken words on paper was not enough,
    So... Bye Bye Love Letter. 

     

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    Qualin commented on Bye Bye Love Letter

    07-18-2010

    SHYNESS IS A VERTUE TO MANY THAT YOU WILL LET PASS BY, FORE THEY MAY POCESS THE SAME MISFORTUNE.ALOT OF POTENTIAL HERE GAL!! QUALIN
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    Mandi commented on Bye Bye Love Letter

    07-16-2010

    This is certainly a different approach from any I have ever seen before. That is good.,Stimulating and refreshing.... I hope you stick arouond and teach old fogiies llike me a few new tricks.
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    rainyxsun

    07/16/2010

    I guess it is a different approach. I started writing and it just came to me this way. (: Thank you and I will be sticking around to read and maybe write more.

    jbc345 commented on Bye Bye Love Letter

    07-15-2010

    I love the structure of this poem. I agree with red, awesome job.
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    rainyxsun

    07/15/2010

    Thank you ! (: I'm happy now. xD

    redbloodink commented on Bye Bye Love Letter

    07-15-2010

    wow Rain just let me say......... " Spoken words on paper" or str8 out of our mouths isn't enough all the time.... Some times it's the unspoken words and the jester of love that touch some one the most... For I have found words are just words and people can hear and miss interpet them wrong... With this talent you have maybe you should consider writting more so you can be a blessing to others with the words spoken on paper....... love red
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    rainyxsun

    07/15/2010

    Like "Action speaks louder than words." (: Thank you! I might consider writing more.

    redbloodink

    07/15/2010

    nice I look foward to that.... and if you do write another send me some mail asking me to read it..... I don't come here half of what I use too........ red

    rainyxsun

    07/15/2010

    Okie dokie. x) I will !

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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