can you hear me

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    i wrote this in memory of my son louie, who was hit while riding his motorcycle,nine years ago,july 2nd.we had to let him go july 8th.to some its been years,to me it was yesterday.

    can you hear me

    can you hear me louie,when i talk to you 
    sometimes i feel so all alone,i dont know what to do.
    everyone around me seems to be changing,or maybe its only me.
    its as though i have this pain inside that only i can see.
    louie would you ask the lord,if only for a moment or two,
    if he might let you come back,so i could talk to you. 
    just to tell you how much i love you,and how i miss you so.
     so  one more time i could kiss   your cheek,then id let you go. 
    please tell him that i understand  if he says he cant do this for me.
    it was only wishful thinking,some things are'nt  meant to be.
    i know your not far away,and when the good lord calls my name.
    we'll all be together, we'll be happy once again.
    fore we all meet again,again in the end.
                                                                                       

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