Can You See?

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    Can You See?
    Can you see her pain
    Can you see through her mask
    Can you see the truth through the lies she hides behind

    Can you see her sadness
    Can you see her fear
    Can you see how unhappy her life has made her

    Can you see through what she wants the world to see
    Can you see through who she pretends to be
    Can you see through the life she pretends to lead

    Can you see what's wrong
    Can you see she's not whole
    Can you see into her head, her heart, her soul?

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    GonzoHunter commented on Can You See?

    06-02-2009

    I agree. More! It just drops. Great idea and writing, but it just drops and I know there is more to it then this illusion of an ending.
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    Drivingczar commented on Can You See?

    03-22-2009

    Thought provoking! More! More!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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