Can't win

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    Can't win

       She listens to the song that reminds her of you... She wants to forget and get over you... It hurts so much. She trys not to show it, but no matter how hard. She tries not to show it in her eyes.
      She's moved on...to a great new guy... but certain things make her want to cry.
      A single Lyric, 
        A song played slow,
     her tears she fights, not wanting to show, she trys to forget.
      But your memory lingers,
       her throat hurts,her hand quivers
         her heart is aching
     deep inside.
      She listens to the song remembering the times.
        She tries to forget, but her mind spins trying to defeat you,
                        but she can't win...

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    Moline commented on Can't win

    10-30-2009

    songs are like that and that poem is so true. Bet she wins though.
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    KyrsCruz

    10/30/2009

    yeah. and i hope so...thanks for the comment.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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