Carnival of the Dark
Lit by shallow moon
Caressed by absent lover
Held by angry thoughts
Waiting for the eclipse
Caressed by absent lover
Held by angry thoughts
Waiting for the eclipse
Carnival of the Dark
3 Comments
Tags: Dark Poetry
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Serzi commented on Carnival of the Dark
07-27-2009
- I can relate to these thoughts. Whether they go further than the resemblance to my own does not matter. You have left me breathless by saying so much with few words. POWERFUL.
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drewking commented on Carnival of the Dark
02-14-2009
- few woeds, says so much,, great pice of work...
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Spacer commented on Carnival of the Dark
02-12-2009
- SImple....KOol...Poem...
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