CHANGE

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CHANGE

                        Today I am a new person, why? Because of change.Today I am a new person, why? Because of a move.Today I am a new person, why? Because of people.Today I am a new person, why? because of GOD.  Change is bette,r than no change at all.          CHANGE!!!!!!!!!!

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RStornes commented on CHANGE

10-26-2009

This is short and sweet also to the point, with the exception of the misspelled word, I do enjoy reading it. We can all use some changes in our lives. With God as our source he can help us to do it.

Robby

10/27/2009

thank you ever so much. i will work o the missed spelled words.

dumplin commented on CHANGE

10-23-2009

Once again, very short. Also very repetitive. There are many misspellings in this. I'm sorry, I can't rate this one until you revise it.

icu2 commented on CHANGE

10-20-2009

A rolling stone gathers no moss!.....Just what does that mean anyway? I like this poem! Looking forward to more Robby, keep them coming......................TEN!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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