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i wrote this about a friend


You say lets bring some 
cheer and you always
do with your team of
two you dance and you
swivel so happily in tune

Your in a shape
of a pyramid
 no a box
or more

When you mess up
up you always say
he who laughs last
laughs best and then you
pull a trick but not
not her but you so

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Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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