CHURCH FOLK'S

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    CHURCH FOLK'S
    CHURCH FOLK



    PASTOR PREACHERS & BISHOPS TOO I'M SO SICK OF CHURCH
    FOLK I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO. ALL THE WHILE THEY ARE SHOUTN & PRAISNG HIM THEY ARE THE ONES OUT HERE COMMITTING THE MOST SIN!! I FEEL A PASTOR IS SUPPOSE TO BE LIKE A SHEPHARD OVER HE'S SHEEP !! THEY SHOULD CALL AND CHECK AND SEE I U NEED ANYTHING!! I THINK THE CHURCH AS A WHOLE SHOULD TAKE UP A LOVE OFFERING FOR THOSE IN NEED!! BECAUSE I'VE PLANED MY SEED , MANY OF TIMES, AND NOW THAT I'M DOWN AND OUT I DON'T RECEIVE A DIME!!BUT THATS OK CUZ THE LORD HAS MY BACK AND ALWAYS MAKES AWAY OUT NO WAY!! AND I AM A BELIEVER OF HIM THRU EACH AND EVERYDAY!! DON'T BE OFFENDED BY THIS POEM CUZ KNOW IF U ARE DOING RIGHT OR WRONG!!
    HAVE A HAPPY EASTER BE BLEASSED AND NOT STRESSED!!


    WRITTEN BY Dana Brown aka Ladyd37

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    Romano commented on CHURCH FOLK'S

    06-17-2009

    Church hurt is one of the worst beside family hurt, because you dont expect folk that claim they are about God's business to let you down, yet these are the ones that hurt you just as bad as family, for the most part we all have been there, but we have to look at church as the doctors office. we go to get a remedy for our ailement, and if it doesnt work we go back for that next fix of something stronger, The pews just like the ER is full of folk with hurt and pain and for the most part the wait is long and you dont wanna pay that bill when it comes because of the customer service you finally got was bad. much like the ER the church is hurt. focus on you and not them, that is when you truly get your reward, remember put not your faith or trust in man, for it is then when he lets you down. we are all human none of us are perfect, yet there are some that can do better if they try
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    kdavidscott1 commented on CHURCH FOLK'S

    05-26-2009

    I enjoyed this piece very much...keep on keeping on - and church folks are the same as you and I - we al need a church home to call our own - but the devil will use them too to keep you away - go on up in there and get your praise the way you see fit - if you can give then give if you can't give then don't God loves a cheerful giver - you will not be a cheerful giver giving something you don't have - when your time come to give more then do so - if all you can give is a dollar so be it if that
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    kdavidscott1 commented on CHURCH FOLK'S

    05-26-2009

    That was an excellent expression of your feelings toward church folks - I loved it Dana - call me if you ever need any pointers or assistance my number is on my profile - I am willing to help anyone who is interested in writing - because we are so few... KD
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    JinaKaye commented on CHURCH FOLK'S

    05-24-2009

    So true, girl, so true! I am really feeling that one. I think that's why I have not found a church home since moving to NYC.
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    concience commented on CHURCH FOLK'S

    04-29-2009

    boy did you hit that 1 on the nose! i feel every word in this piece, and though its sad, its so true. keep that truth comming!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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