Committing a crime

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    Committing a crime

    Lips of a wickedness
    eyes of the blindness
    crimes being committed
    every second from your kindness
    who knew love feeling so right
    could look so wrong
    from others who think they know the songs
    lyrics and rhymes and physics
    when they just singin n thinking
    goin along with whats sinkin in their thoughts

    love should be handcuffed and locked away
    for all his murderers and his fans stuffed in prison today
    in their minds, day by day
    someone becomes a player being set to play
    you can turn the game around or let it play
    when it comes to love it goes both ways
    so just dribble ur heart
    n go down that court
    cause that path determines ur oppurtunities
    so dont look back and go forth
    with the crimes and joy love got in stored

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    simplyfantasic commented on Committing a crime

    03-13-2009

    this is a very insightful poem! its great!

    Phatom commented on Committing a crime

    03-10-2009

    Well done, quite interesting, like the imagery...

    NacolleMarie commented on Committing a crime

    03-10-2009

    this was amazin i love it

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