Cool thoughts for a hot summers day.

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    Cool thoughts for a hot summers day.
     Cold that stills the river and awakens the child in me.
    Your snowflakes are glistening gifts of crystals from the sky.
    Winter, I praise you, others take you for granted, I do not.
    I wish I could store your essence, to cool me on a hot summer day.
    I dance upon your white velvet carpet and sing praises; as you
    decorate the vines with tufts of marshmallow ice that sparkle in the
    dark when touched by moonlight.

    By Sue Real © 2002
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    papapaczki commented on Cool thoughts for a hot summers day.

    11-09-2009

    I love it when it snows. Winter is my favorite season. I'm going to share this with everyone I know that hates it.
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    icu2 commented on Cool thoughts for a hot summers day.

    11-09-2009

    Girl, you sound like you are from Michigan! That's how we feel about snow. I think this is a right fine poem!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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