Daddy's Poem

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    Daddy's Poem

    I watch you in sorrow,
    As you slowly fade away.
    This pain and suffering you feel,
    Why on earth does it have to stay?
    I don't want you to go,
    But I know in my heart it's the only way.
    As your pain intensifies,
    You become even more closer with God.
    But as I watch you suffer,
    I become more distant and all I'm able to do is sob.
    I don't want you to know,
    This pain I feel inside.
    There is no need for extra worry,
    So this pain I will just have to hide.
    Time will go on,
    And soon you won't be here.
    You will be so far away,
    But yet in my heart you will be very near.
    As you stare into the Face of God,
    There will be no ore sorrow,
    And your pain and suffering will be gone.
    So Come to think of it,
    You are very lucky.
    Soon you'll be in a place,
    To some only exists in dreams.
    That place is so distant to me,
    So far away it seems.
    So when you arrive in this beautiful paradise,
    Remember all of us
    Who stood by your side
    And who also loved you so,
    And keep an eye out for each of us ,
    For when it is our time to go.

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    SAYANDSEE commented on Daddy's Poem

    11-29-2008

    TO SHARE A LOVED ONES PAIN SHOWS GREAT LOVE. IT'S OFTEN SAID THAT THOSE CLOSE TO THE HEART ARE NEVER REALLY FAR AWAY. MEMORIES OF LOVE ARE LIKE TREASURES FROM ABOVE. TREASURE YOUR LOVE.

    DonJaun48 commented on Daddy's Poem

    11-12-2008

    good to write from the HEART it helps GOD be with you

    jabar commented on Daddy's Poem

    11-09-2008

    "words of a bleeding heart". dat was....... no words to describe it! take care.

    Lois commented on Daddy's Poem

    11-09-2008

    Enjoyed your beautiful poem. I know how it feels, I have walked in your shoes. Many blessings!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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